WWW - There are some key features evident Vijender, and you do begin to consider aspects of genre and how it is conveyed. EBI - Your comments need more depth, and you need to consider a wider range of features. The image for example - you need to consider more than just the central image in the picture. In the Neighbours poster for example - consider why they are all in line and who is pitched against who? What might this suggest about the relationships between the characters and the order they are placed in front of the shot. How does this link with the top strap line -vs? You also need to consider the strap line in more detail - parenthood vs sisterhood - again what does this suggest about the plot and the key themes? How is this idea evident in the image? You also need to consider the word 'sorority' and what this might suggest about the plot. You also may want to consider the fact that this is a sequel (2) - how might this target the audience? You make the point that it is a comedy but you need to consider how the comedy is evident in the poster - through the image, the background, the colours, the fonts and the strap line and the language used. With reference to Pete's dragon, again more needed on the image - he is curled up in the tail so what does this suggest about their relationship and how is this then reinforced through the strap line etc? Consider the use of Disney - what does this suggest to the audience? Why is it there? Again more needed on the strap line - secrets are big - how does the big relate to the ideas in the image? You need to make the links? How do you know this is a children's fantasy film - what gives you these clues? What can you learn about the plot? How?
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ReplyDeleteWWW - There are some key features evident Vijender, and you do begin to consider aspects of genre and how it is conveyed.
ReplyDeleteEBI - Your comments need more depth, and you need to consider a wider range of features.
The image for example - you need to consider more than just the central image in the picture. In the Neighbours poster for example - consider why they are all in line and who is pitched against who? What might this suggest about the relationships between the characters and the order they are placed in front of the shot. How does this link with the top strap line -vs?
You also need to consider the strap line in more detail - parenthood vs sisterhood - again what does this suggest about the plot and the key themes? How is this idea evident in the image? You also need to consider the word 'sorority' and what this might suggest about the plot. You also may want to consider the fact that this is a sequel (2) - how might this target the audience?
You make the point that it is a comedy but you need to consider how the comedy is evident in the poster - through the image, the background, the colours, the fonts and the strap line and the language used.
With reference to Pete's dragon, again more needed on the image - he is curled up in the tail so what does this suggest about their relationship and how is this then reinforced through the strap line etc?
Consider the use of Disney - what does this suggest to the audience? Why is it there?
Again more needed on the strap line - secrets are big - how does the big relate to the ideas in the image?
You need to make the links? How do you know this is a children's fantasy film - what gives you these clues? What can you learn about the plot? How?
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