Try and avoid just stating which shots and angles have been used - you must explain why and how they have been used. Don't just describe the content of the scene - consider why it is happening not just what is happening. Write in full sentences and punctuate them accurately. Proof read your writing. For a more in-depth analysis, I would use shorter scenes. Try and avoid 'and then and then...' Don't narrate the scene - just pick out the key features and analyse why they have been used. 'The mother wears pink to show she is maternal.' Why/how is this significant? Your writing shots do not run for long enough - can't read them without pausing the film.
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ReplyDeleteTry and avoid just stating which shots and angles have been used - you must explain why and how they have been used. Don't just describe the content of the scene - consider why it is happening not just what is happening.
ReplyDeleteWrite in full sentences and punctuate them accurately. Proof read your writing. For a more in-depth analysis, I would use shorter scenes.
Try and avoid 'and then and then...' Don't narrate the scene - just pick out the key features and analyse why they have been used.
'The mother wears pink to show she is maternal.' Why/how is this significant?
Your writing shots do not run for long enough - can't read them without pausing the film.
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