You need to comment on key scenes, so your comments will need to appear after each key scene you are focusing on, not at the end of the film. It needs to be evident, which scenes you are focusing on. You need an overview. Evaluation. Why the ariel shot in particular? You state the shots show her facial expressions - you need to state what expressions are evident. Not much comment on editing - can you consider how the scenes are put together? In terms of sound - make sure you are commenting on the sound - you comment on the bulb breaking and how no-one seems to be breaking it but this is not sound. Consider how the sound seems to be heightened and how the sound contributes to the tension created. The lack of sound almost forces the audience to listen out for things like the character.
You need to comment on key scenes, so your comments will need to appear after each key scene you are focusing on, not at the end of the film. It needs to be evident, which scenes you are focusing on.
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Why the ariel shot in particular?
You state the shots show her facial expressions - you need to state what expressions are evident.
Not much comment on editing - can you consider how the scenes are put together?
In terms of sound - make sure you are commenting on the sound - you comment on the bulb breaking and how no-one seems to be breaking it but this is not sound. Consider how the sound seems to be heightened and how the sound contributes to the tension created. The lack of sound almost forces the audience to listen out for things like the character.
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