As I stated below - do not put your analysis at the end of the film. Your analysis needs to be placed next to the scenes you are analysing. You are forcing the examiner to watch the film. Have the link to the film separately and use screen shots, or if you want to use the video, can you cut the scenes that are not relevant to your analysis? Bit repetitive at times Vijender, you need to re-read this and keep in mind the comments I have made on your analysis for the previous two films. Make sure you are fully explaining why and how, and not just what. Avoid generic statements such as 'this is a common convention.' Consider why it is such a common convention? Why is it so effective? Your editing needs some work - you need to go back through the work on editing from last year so you are aware of exactly what you need to be commenting on. Proof read and double check your possessive apostrophes! Overview? Evaluation?
As I stated below - do not put your analysis at the end of the film. Your analysis needs to be placed next to the scenes you are analysing. You are forcing the examiner to watch the film. Have the link to the film separately and use screen shots, or if you want to use the video, can you cut the scenes that are not relevant to your analysis?
ReplyDeleteBit repetitive at times Vijender, you need to re-read this and keep in mind the comments I have made on your analysis for the previous two films. Make sure you are fully explaining why and how, and not just what. Avoid generic statements such as 'this is a common convention.' Consider why it is such a common convention? Why is it so effective?
Your editing needs some work - you need to go back through the work on editing from last year so you are aware of exactly what you need to be commenting on.
Proof read and double check your possessive apostrophes!
Overview? Evaluation?
Changes have been made
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