Some insightful comments made here and there is detail in your examination. At times you are generic; avoid phrases such as 'it stands out' - they don't really offer anything. Maybe consider the significance of the woman facing the wall and the fact we cannot see her face but you can see the doll's face. Consider why the majority of the image is dominated by the room and not the woman. Proof read your writing. Keep an eye on apostrophes and your use of 'usually'!
Some insightful comments made here and there is detail in your examination.
ReplyDeleteAt times you are generic; avoid phrases such as 'it stands out' - they don't really offer anything.
Maybe consider the significance of the woman facing the wall and the fact we cannot see her face but you can see the doll's face. Consider why the majority of the image is dominated by the room and not the woman.
Proof read your writing. Keep an eye on apostrophes and your use of 'usually'!
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