Bit more needed here. You need to consider what exactly is commented on - plot, characters/actors, techniques, effects, comparisons to other films? Consider the order of these too - so what does the review begin with? What does it end with? You also need to consider the language and style in more detail. You comment on the fact it is playful at times but you don't really consider why and the effects achieved? You need to consider which language features are used to persuade the reader. What is the writer's viewpoint and how is it presented? Remember, the purpose of this is so you know what to include in your review, how to structure it and how to write it using an appropriate style and tone.
Bit more needed here.
ReplyDeleteYou need to consider what exactly is commented on - plot, characters/actors, techniques, effects, comparisons to other films? Consider the order of these too - so what does the review begin with? What does it end with?
You also need to consider the language and style in more detail. You comment on the fact it is playful at times but you don't really consider why and the effects achieved? You need to consider which language features are used to persuade the reader. What is the writer's viewpoint and how is it presented?
Remember, the purpose of this is so you know what to include in your review, how to structure it and how to write it using an appropriate style and tone.
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