I want to see evidence of your links. So you will need to take screen shots from your film and then screen shots from your poster/review and explain which features have been used and manipulated to link and why you have made these particular links. You could also do with commenting on features you have used that are less obvious - more subtle links you may have incorporated. Huge chunks of writing are not very clear - we need to specific examples! For example: think about how the image on the poster links to the title of the film - and then consider whether you have made mention of that particular scene in your review - consider why you felt this particular idea was so important to all three products and how you have maybe manipulated the entity in each of the three texts so although it's the same idea, it's slightly differently presented in each one - why have you done this?
I want to see evidence of your links. So you will need to take screen shots from your film and then screen shots from your poster/review and explain which features have been used and manipulated to link and why you have made these particular links.
ReplyDeleteYou could also do with commenting on features you have used that are less obvious - more subtle links you may have incorporated.
Huge chunks of writing are not very clear - we need to specific examples!
For example: think about how the image on the poster links to the title of the film - and then consider whether you have made mention of that particular scene in your review - consider why you felt this particular idea was so important to all three products and how you have maybe manipulated the entity in each of the three texts so although it's the same idea, it's slightly differently presented in each one - why have you done this?